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Hello dear,

nn

I hope you are well.

I am writing this email regarding assignment 7 that we submitted on 15 June 2020, and later you gave me feedback on Tuesday, 7 July. my concern exactly, specifically Q3 within assignment 7 is that  I got 0 out of 20 marks in that question.

I was unable to effectively work on that question as I was under too much stress due to a lot of submission in other assignments in different topics. Therefore, the answer that I submitted for this question wasn’t the right one and ideally,  according to your notes below the question. I would like to ask you, if you may allow me please please to give me a second chance to do it, please.

I have previously performed well throughout the coursework and I will be grateful if you struck out this assignment's grade as it will lower my overall grade. I regret not being able to do my best and I apologize.

For any additional information, please reach me on my email. I am very sorry for any inconvenience and thank you for understanding.

Regards

nn

Answer 1

Hello dear,

I hope you are doing well.

I am writing this email regarding assignment 7 that I submitted on 15 June 2020, and after going through the assignment you gave me feedback on it, which i received on Tuesday, 7 July. My main concern in Q3 mentioned in assignment 7 is that, I scored 0 out of 20 marks in that particular question.

I was unable to properly work on that question as I was under too much stress due to lot of pending submissions in other assignments in different topics. Therefore, the answer that I submitted for that particular question wasn’t the right and ideal one, according to your notes that were given beneath the question. I would like to request you, if you can give me one more opportunity to prove myself, then i would like to solve that question once again.

I have previously performed well throughout the coursework and I will be grateful if you may struck out this assignment's grade as it will lower my overall grade. I am in regret for not being able to give my best and I apologize for the same.

For any additional information, please reach me through my email. I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience caused and thank you for understanding.

Regards

nn