Question

Is my writing for this email correct?

I mean academy and grammar. (you can edit and add any sentence)

I hope you will help me in drafting this e-mail

Dear Prof. Joseph.

I hope you are doing well.

As you know, I received an email from the decision-making center stating that it is necessary to update the Academic Technology Approval Scheme (ATAS) certificate which ended on July 15,2020. Consequently, I have applied for the ATAS online to UKVI on October 19, 2020, and I am waiting for this to be granted, and because it takes a long time to issue a new ATAS certificate, about 20 days, I was in contact with Dr. Muller over the past days to request a quicker review of my new ATAS submission with the ATAS Department. However, I received an email from him last Friday (attached) explaining that this is not possible; that unfortunately ATAS is located in a different governmental organization, so they are unable to request a quicker review of my new ATAS submission. And I have to wait.

Regarding his indication that I can start a PhD remotely, I told him that I have been in constant contact with you throughout the Corona pandemic and that I have already been reviewing what is being published regarding my research topic throughout this period; and that I am still continuing to do so, which makes me shorten the first beginnings upon my arrival at Manchester University.

I am sure that you know the reasons for my inability to attend the university in the past, beginning with the closure of borders and the suspension of international flights because of Coronavirus pandemic. At the present I am following up with the decision-making center regarding the re-issuance of an alternative visa as I could not enter the UK during the period shown with earlier visa (from 21/03/2020 to 20/04/2020).

Given the circumstances, I humbly assure you that I will let you know when I get a response to my ATAS submission.

Thanks, and Best regards

Nada

Answer 1

Dear Prof. Joseph,

I trust you are progressing admirably.

As you have realized that the conditions because of the Corona pandemic brought about the borders to close and the suspension of global flights, which prompted a delay in going to my mission headquarters in Britain, in addition to that the University of Manchester has been largely closed to students since March 2020. I need a letter from you which shows that I am in constant contact with you during the Covid pandemic about the research topics and that we have begun but in a little manner, to develop initial plans for a Ph.D. Research project since I am confronting an impediment and questions why I have not begun the Ph.D. program yet and this will truly assist me with explaining that, notwithstanding accelerating the systems for opening a new scholarship file by my sponsor and afterward Final financial guarantee application and submit it to the university .

I trust you will comprehend my circumstance and help me with that.

Best respects,

Lama

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