Question

Is my writing for this email correct?

I mean academy and grammar. (you can edit and add any sentence)

Dear sir/madam,

UK Visas and Immigration

I hope you are doing well.

I am working hard to provide evidence from The University of Sydney confirming my new admission dates commencing within 3 months according to your e-mail request on October 2, 2020. Noting that my Visa Application( GWF0565848 ) was to get an alternate visa with new entry dates because I could not to enter UK during the period shown by previous visa (from 21/03/2020 to 20/04/2020) due to lockdown caused by the Coronavirus (Covid-19).

I will send you a copy of the evidence once I receive it.

Thanks, and Best regards

Rakan

Answer 1

The correct mail format should be

Dear Sir/ ma'am,

UK Visas and Immigration

Subject :

Greetings of the day !!

I am writing this email to inform you that I have been working extremly hard to procure relevant documents from The University of Sydney which would confirm my new admission date. The new admission dates are commencing within 3 months from tje timeline mentioned in your email request dated October 2, 2020.

Since I could not enter the United Kingdom on my previous visa (from 21/03/2020 to 20/04/2020) due to lockdown casued by Coronavirus, I was scheduled to get an alternate visa with new entry dates based on my Visa Appplication Number GWF0565848

Given the circumstances , I humbly assure you that I will send you the relvant documents confirming my candidature as soon as I receive them.

Please let me know if you require any information.

Looking forward to hear from you soon.

Best regards

Rakan