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Is this email good?? ( I mean grammatically and academy)

To Whom It May Concern

I have known Mr. George since he joined us in ‎2011. We worked together in the national center Applied Physics. I was the person who is in charge for his research activities. Based on his performances on the given assignments, I found him a very hard worker. He is competent, courteous, very diligent, studious, and cooperative colleague. He could be considered as an initiative person in the sense of his ability to embark on new ideas without prompting. He also has the ability to work steadily even in difficult circumstances or with minimal motivations. Mr. George was involved in several experiments run by our group. Provided with suitable environment and proper guidance, I do believe that George will be a serious worker and capable of carrying out his high degree studies. I highly recommend him to carry out a PHD in the field of Nuclear Engineering.

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To Whom It May Concern

I have known Mr. George since he joined us in ‎2011. We worked together in the national center of Applied Physics. I was the person who is in charge of his research activities. Based on his performances on the given assignments, I found him a very hard worker. He is a competent, courteous, very diligent, studious, and cooperative colleague. He could be considered as an initiative person in the sense of his ability to embark on new ideas without prompting. He also has the ability to work steadily even in difficult circumstances or with minimal motivations. Mr. George was involved in several experiments run by our group. Provided with a suitable environment and proper guidance, I do believe that George will be a serious worker and capable of carrying out his high degree studies. I highly recommend him to carry out a Ph.D. in the field of Nuclear Engineering.

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