Question

Please, I need somebody to correct my writing.

In chapter one, Marji is 10 years old in 1980. In 1980, the new regime in Iran made it necessary for women to wear the veil. They also separated the schools between male and female. Marji was told us that she wanted to be a prophet. On the other hand, she was told her parents she will be a doctor. In chapter two, the new regime burned a movie theater with a pack of people in it. Marji was wanted to join the demonstration that's being arranged against the regime, but her parents won't let her go. In chapter three, her dad described to her how the king actually came to the throne: The British placed him there to take control of Iran's oil. In chapter four, her grandpa served as prime minister, but he was denied by the new regime. One night, the family has waited a long time for Marji's father to come home from a demonstration. Marji was though he has died. When he came back, he was described what happened at the demonstration, but Marji is too young to understand. She was decideed to teach herself to understand what her father said, and she was started reading lots of books. In chapter five, Marji reads and realizes that the biggest problem is the divide between social groups. She has recognized the first divide when her maid, Mehri, falls in love with the neighbor but she was denied to continue with him because she was from the lower level than he. In chapter six, time for another regime change in Iran. People are excited, but Marji's parents know better than to expect any peace. Marji bullies a kid in school because his father was with the king police and he has killed the people. After her mom talked with her, Marji realized that she has to learn to forgive. In chapter seven, the political hostages are released, and two of the released hostages are friends of the family. They invite Mohsen and Siamak to their house, and Mohsen told them about the painful torture he suffered. later, she feels overwhelmed and tries to get a peace with her mom and God. In chapter eight, Marji is sad because of her dad never arrest. "My father was not a hero", she said. unfortunately, her Uncle Anoosh was arrested. His story is scary. When he returns to Iran, he is captured and jailed for nine years. Marji believes that is awesome. In chapter nine, while Uncle Anoosh stays in their house, Marji hears all the political discussion. It's like watching a foreign TV shows without the subtitles: She can understand some titles, but not the specifics details. One day, Marji comes back from school to find Anoosh left. Marji's dad said: Anoosh was arrested, and he's allowed to talk to one person in the prison, and he wants to talk to her. When she visited him, he tells her, "You are the little girl I always wanted to have", and he gives her a little swan that he made to match the one he gave her before. He then calls her the "star of his life". It's really effective words because it's the last time she meets with him. In chapter ten, Iran starts shutting down. They shut down the U.S. embassy and the universities. One day, she attends her parents to a demonstration, where she sees someone stabbed in the leg. That's the last demonstration they go to. They take a vacation to Spain. It's nice, but when they return, they know that a new war is starting, this time with IRAQ. In chapter eleven, Marji was with her fathers' at his office when Iraqi fighter struck Tehran. At school, Marji heard that a friend's dad is a fighter pilot for Iran. He died in the battle. Marji was told her friend that her father is a hero, and she should be proud. The friend responds: "I wish he were alive and in jail rather than dead and a hero". In chapter 12, Iranian has cleared out the supermarket shelves. Marji's mother's friend's house is destroyed when Iraqi fighter bomb Tehran, so she and her family became refugees at Marji's family. They go out shopping one day, and they overhear two women talking about "the refugees," which Mali (Marji's mom's friend) and her family. These women say, "Southern women are all whores". Marji and her family are ashamed to be "spat upon by their own kind".

Answer 1

Please find the below lines which need to be corrected.

1. In 1980, Marji were 10 years old.to

2. They had also separated the schools between male and female.

3. Marji wanted to join the demonstration that has been arranged against

4. In chapter three, her dad had described her that how the king actually

5.One night, the family has waited a long time for Marji's father to came home from a demonstration.

6. but When he came back, he actually described what happened at the demonstration, but Marji was too young to understand.

7.She decided to teach herself in order to understand what her father said, and she started reading lots of books.

8.In chapter five, Marji realized that the biggest problem was the divide between social groups.

9.In chapter six, time for another regime changed in Iran. People were excited, but Marji's parents know better than to expect any peace.

10.Marji bullied a kid in school because his father was the part of the king police and he had killed the people.

11.After the discussion with her mom, Marji realized that she has to learn to forgive.

12.In chapter seven, the political hostages has released, and two of the released hostages were family friends.

13.They invited Mohsen and Siamak to their house, and Mohsen told them about the painful tortured he suffered.

14.later, she felt overwhelmed and tried to get a peace with her mom and God. In chapter eight, Marji was sad because of her dad never arrested. "My father was not a hero", she said. unfortunately, her Uncle Anoosh was arrested.

15. In chapter nine, while Uncle Anoosh stayed in their house, Marji heard all the political discussion. It's like watching a foreign TV shows without the subtitles: She can understand some titles, but not the specifics details.

17.One day, Marji came back from school to find Anoosh but he left. Marji's dad said: Anoosh was arrested, and he allowed to talk to one person in the prison, and he wants to talk to her.

18.he gave her a little swan that he made to match the one he gave her before.

19.He then called her "the star of his life". It was really effective words because it was the last time she had meet with him.

21. In chapter ten, Iran started shutting down. They shut down the U.S. embassy and the universities. One day, she had attended her parents to demonstrate, where she sees someone stabbed in the leg. That was the last demonstration they went to.

22.They took a vacation and went Spain. It was nice, but when they returned, they knew that a new war was starting, this time with IRAQ.

23.Marji had told her friend that her father is a hero, and she feel proud for this.

24. Marji's mother's friend's house was destroyed when Iraqi fighter bomb Tehran, so she and her family became refugees at Marji's family. They went out for shopping one day, and they overheard two women talking about "the refugees," which Mali (Marji's mom's friend) and her family. These women said, "Southern women are all whores". Marji and her family are ashamed to be "spat upon by their own kind".