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OPTIONAL: Independent Practice: (revising a business letter) -- The following business letter does not abide by business letter writing guidelines. Rewrite it fully, applying business letter format and content requirements.

Dear Mr. Sami,

My firm is taking a survey of businesses in your part of the world to see if there is any likelihood of getting you on board our international computer network and so I thought I would see if you might like to take the chance. In today’s shaky world, business events can change overnight and without the proper scoop you could be left out in the cold. We can alleviate that mess.

Not only do we interface with major exchanges all around the globe but we make sure that we get the facts to you pronto. We do not sit on our hands here at Intertel.

Check out our website on who and how we serve and I have no doubts that you will e-mail or ring us up to find out about join- ing up.

One last point, bro: Can you really risk going out on a limb without first knowing that you have all the facts at your fingertips about worldwide business events? Intertel is there to save you.

Fondly,

Answer 1

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(Recipient's address)

Nov 1 ,2020

(Sender's location)

Dear Mr. Sami

I hope that you are doing well. My name is ABC. I work for Intertel, that attempts to give best International Computer network. I might want to ask a question, which is important for the study that my firm is at present performing by taking organization like yours as the example outline.

My question is,  Can you really risk going out on a limb without first knowing that you have all the facts at your fingertips about worldwide business events? In the event that your answer is 'NO', would you be able to confide in a firm like us, to assist you with giving all business information effortlessly, and reduce a lot of mess in the process of decision making ? On the off chance that answer is positive, I might want to tell you, we not just interface with significant exchanges all around the world yet we likewise ensure that we get current realities to you immediately. We don't neglect to move here at Intertel

On the off chance that, I sound trustable, do checkout our site on who and how we serve.

Hoping to get a positive reaction from your side.

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