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I chose to interview Dinh, who is an active, assertive person and a business major at ACC. Although he is not a math and science major, he has already taken a lot of different science and math classes. These classes include algebra, general chemistry one and two, general physics one and two, and geometry, etc. Right now, he is taking statistics and investments. Dinh told me that he likes business world, where he has a chance to meet and communicate with different kinds of people and where winners and losers are determined every day. He thinks that the harshness and competition in the business world will make him progress every day to perfect himself in life and he enjoys that. Dinh is open and friendly in my view. He is not a close friend, but he was willing to help me when I invited him to my interview for math’s real world examples. He seemed very excited for the interview, and he said that he is confident in his abilities to answer my questions. Dinh likes real world’s examples and so he says that he can start to answer questions now.

Before conducting the interview, I told Dinh that he will be a main character of the interview and my job is just asking him questions and no more than that. The purpose of the interview discovers and knows about his thinking and thought process when he answers questions. Therefore, he has a right to express his thoughts, whatever he thinks that describes correct answers to questions; feel free to share his ideas and don’t be shy to explain questions.

Answer 1

Dinh is an active, assertive person and a business major at ACC. He is not a maths and science major but earlier he used to conduct classes in Algebra, General chemistry (1& 2), General physics (1&2) ,Geometry, etc.. Currently he conducts classes in statistics and investments . So, I decided to interview Dinh. Dinh states that he likes business world because he has a chance to meet and communicate with different kinds of people. In business winners and losers are determined every day. He also states that the heavy competition in the business world would make him enjoy and progress every day . On my views Dinh is open and friendly . I had invited him to 'Maths real world examples'. Though he is not a close friend of mine,he was willing to help me in the programme. Dinh was very excited for the interview, and he is confident to answer my questions. Dinh likes real world’s examples and so he says that he can answer questions immediately . I have mentioned Dinh earlier to the interview, that he will be a main part of the interview and I just ask him questions . The purpose of the interview is to discover his thoughts as he answers questions. So, he has a privilege to express his thoughts, whatsoever may be. Don't be embarrased and feel free to share his ideas while explaining questions.