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Door slamming, voice screaming loud piercing cries from extreme emotion and pain. That was the sound of John. John got home from the hospital with numerous head injuries from fighting at school with Bob and Sam who were the class bullies. They were fighting because John accused Bob and Sam of stealing his assignments in front of the whole class. Bob and Sam both tried to defend themselves but the argument between the three got heated up and suddenly Bob, Sam, and John started fighting and John hit his head where he had to rush to the emergency room. This caused John to be at home. John was happy that he won the fight and that while the fight was going on his class was cheering him on. However, when it was night time John would feel a sharp stabbing pain, extreme heat, and burning sensation in his head. A deep ache in his brain and an achy pain that kept occurring in his brain and it would cause John to have regrets of why he will never fight again. The pain was extremely heavy, dull, and discomfort that Everyone who lived in his house could hear John from his room crying out for help because the medications that the doctor prescribed would not help to ease the pain. John was in pain seven days a week from Monday to Sunday. “Every day John would think to himself and say maybe next time I’ll think before I act and I won’t be in all these pains but at least I won the fight so the pain was worth it anyways” These horrible pains prevented John from going to school and helping around the house. This causes John to feel guilty because he is the person who always maintains the house, clean, and does chores. John is not used to staying in bed all day and not helping around the house because of how badly he was injured from fighting with Bob and Sam. John was experiencing many different emotions and symptoms. John would get angry, sad and have a lot of fear that when he goes back to school Bob and Sam will still try to fight him because they are still bullies and because the class was only cheering him on and not Sam and Bob so John feels as if they might have been jealous. Moreover, John feels very embarrassed to go back to school because he is not a person who likes to fight and fighting makes John feel ashamed of himself. John started to develop a range of mental disorders such as depression and anxiety as well as behavioral disturbances because John thinks about what people at school would be saying about him. Besides, John was in distrust because he would doubt the honesty and reliability of Bob and Sam he believed that their apology was not sincere. John thinks that when he goes back to school Bob and Sam would want to fight him again. However, John has the intention that “If Sam and Bob try to fight me again I will run to the principal office and call for help but maybe everyone would think I am just scared and afraid to fight, but that's okay they could only think I know what's best for me ” John said. Because he doesn't want to have any regrets again when he can walk away from fighting Bob and Sam. After two months of staying home, John started to recover. John would feel less pain and he was able to help out around the house. Furthermore, John was able to go back to school and this was his biggest fear Because he was still scared of Bob and Sam and he didn’t have any friends at school because He is a new student and He migrated from Guyana. On a bright sunny Monday morning John was going back to school he was feeling Scared, frightened, afraid, and terrified because he did not know what to expect since he is a new student at the school with no friends but got into a fight with the class bullies. When John entered the school campus he noticed that the school environment was different from the first day of school. There were signs on the wall of the school building that provided information about safety, counseling, and also information on why people should not bully others. This information allowed John to feel physical, emotionally, and socially comfortable. Because John feels safe and comfortable that there is help in the school if there is an issue on the school campus. John went to his first-class for the day when John entered the classroom his classmates were smiling at him and greeting him with a warm welcome. John started to feel appreciated, valued, and happy. John went to his seat. His seat was in front of the two-class bullies, Bob and Sam. John was extremely nervous but he didn't show it. John begins to take out his notebooks and copies his notes and answers questions where he knows the answer to what the teacher was asking. Sam and Bob walk over to John's seat and ask him “how he was doing” and invite him to sit with them at lunch. John was surprised because it was unexpected and astonishing that Sam and Bob invited him to have lunch with them. Since John had no friends in the school he takes the offer and smiles. Bob and Sam enjoy lunch with John and they did not make John feel unwelcome or harmful when they were around each other. Bob, Sam, and John would hang out every lunchtime, play games, and get to know each other. Make fun jokes and John gets to realize that Bob and Sam are sorry for the hurt that they caused him and they learn fr

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The Door slammed with a big bang and there were screaming and loud piercing cries rising from the room of John. Those were the sound of John who broke down emotionally and physically after returning home from Hospital with numerous Head injuries after a fight with his class bullies Bob and Sam at School. The fight started as John accused Bob and Sam of stealing his assignments in front of the whole class. Bob and Sam both tried to defend themselves but the argument between the three got heated up and suddenly Bob, Sam, and John started fighting with each other and John hit his head and was rushed to the Emergency Room. At first John was happy that he won the fight and that while the fight was going on, his class was cheering him on. However, when it was night time John felt a sharp stabbing pain, extreme heat, and burning sensation in his head. A deep ache in his brain that kept occurring and he regretted and vowed that he will never fight again. He was in extreme pain for the whole week and even medications didn'nt helped him much in lowering the pain.

Every day John would say to himself " May be next time I would think before I act and I can avoid all the pain but as I got cheers from the class it is worth it ".

The horrible pains prevented John from going to School and participating in house hold chores which made him feel guilty as he used to take good care of cleanliness of the house and do other chores well. He was not a lazy person so staying in Bed was bothering him, further he was going through mixed emotions of anger, sadness and fear and the thought of facing Bob and Sam in the Class after few days was giving him sleepless nights as he felt that because the whole class cheered for him, Bob and Sam would be jealous of him and they would definitely revenge on him. Further John was not a quarrelsome person so he was embarassed to be seen as a quarrelsome person. He started feeling ashamed of himself and developed depression and anxiety. John felt that the apology of Bob and Sam was not reliable and they are definitely going to revenge him on his joining.

John said to himself " If Bob and Sam tries to fight with me, I 'll run to the Principal's Office for help even if everyone thinks I am scared of the fight let them think, I know what is best for me ".

Two Months passed, John recovered from the injuries. His biggest challenge of facing Bob and Sam at school was approaching very fast. John did'nt had any friends at School as he recently migrated from Guyana. On one bright sunny Monday morning John was getting ready for School feeling afraid, scared and frightened as he could'nt expect how he would be treated at School as he had joined the School recently and got into a brawl with his Class bullies. John entered the School and was surprised to see that there were lot of changes in the School environment. The Walls of the School were provided with information on safety, counseling and on why people should not bully others.The information on the Walls made John feel Comfortable emotionally and secured. John felt relaxed that he can get his issues sorted if he fell into trouble.

John entered the Class confidently assured of the safety. To his utter shock he was greeted with warm welcome and smile by his Class bullies. John felt appreciated and valued and he was very happy. John went to his seat. His seat was infront of his two bullies Bob and Sam. John was extremely nervous but was hiding his nervousness. He began taking out his copies and notes and started answering the questions.

Sam and Bob walked to John's seat and asked " How are you doing John ? Can you join us for Lunch? "

John was surprised and astonished at their friendly gesture. He accepted their invitation and joined for lunch with smile. Bob and Sam made John enjoy lunch with them and later on they became friends and used to hang out around. John learnt that Bob and Sam were sorry for the hurt they caused him and they learnt from their mistake .