Question

please type it. . We need to work on your sentence structures and how many ideas are in 1 sentence. Also, there are some phrasing issues but this is okay for now. You have ideas but they need to be written a bit more academically. For example, I need a thesis statement in the introduction. I need clear topic sentences. Try not to write as if you are talking, in the present moment. The conclusion should be a summary of what you just proposed on how they will make a contract and have some positive info, which you do have already. I just need to see more of an academic structure.

_{You need to write 5-8 sentences per paragraph for a total of 20-32 sentences overall.}

Introduction paragraph 1: The thesis statement is usually the last sentence of the introductory
paragraph: This paper is going to discuss how Ms. Adelle Dubois will convince the Saudis
management team to agree to a French and Saudi ballet performance and contract.
Topic sentence

for paragraph 2: Ms. Adelle Dubois will need to respect the local Saudi traditions
when negotiating a contact with the Saudi management team.
Topic sentence

for paragraph 3: To convince the Saudi management team, Ms. Dubois will need to
address the Saudis concern for the French women’s dance attire and whether the dancers may
include male dancers or not.
Topic sentence

for paragraph 4 (conclusion): In conclusion, the success of Ms. Dubois’s contract
depends greatly upon her intercultural communication and persuasion skills.

Case 1: A French firm, The Paris Opera Ballet, sent its senior-level manager, Ms. Adelle Dubois, to
opening discussions to negotiate a performance contract with The Theater of King Fahd Cultural
Center in Riyadh, Saudi Arabia. The discussion will address how the dancers from France will be able
to perform with the Saudi dancers in Saudi Arabia. Briefly, discuss the cultural values of each culture
in a business context. Mention the language used for communication between the two parties.
How will Ms. Dubois convince the Theater of King Fahd to accept her offer and have both the French
and Saudi dancers perform together?

In the introduction, describe the situation and add a thesis statement. In the body of the essay,

paragraph 2 discuss how Ms. Dubois will learn about the Saudi culture.

In paragraph 3, discuss how
Ms. Dubois will address the Saudis concerns about the French women’s dance attire and whether
the dancers may include men or not. In the conclusion, provide a summary reiterating the
advantages Ms. Dubois may cultivate in order to seal the contract.

Answer 1

Introduction :

Ms. Adelle Dubois, A senior level manager of a French firm, The Paris Opera Ballet, comes to Saudi Arabia in order to opening discussions to negotiate a performance contract with the theatre of King Fahd cultural center in Riyadh. Culture differences are there becsuse on one hand in Saudi Arabia they follow a strict culture for women especially and on the other hand France follows an open culture. The language of France is French and for Saudi Arabia is Arabic mostly, so, for conversation English will should be used because it is the global language.

Body :

To convince the King Fahd and Saudi management team for the contract of a performance of French and Saudi dancers, Ms. Dubois has to respect the culture of Saudi. For this she should have the understanding of Saudi culture first. For this she may surf on internet to know about Saudi culture and she may talk to Saudi people about the culture and she may watch some theatre programs in Riyadh to get the better understanding of Saudi culture. Now she can discuss over the contract.

Ms. Dubois came to know after getting the understanding of Saudi culture that they are more men oriented i.e. they have strict rules for women especially for attire, talking to men or any other connection to a man etc. So, in the discussion, when the concern about the attire of French women came she told them that as Saudi is following their culture similarly France is also following it's culture, we respect all the cultures, furthermore, according to Saudi culture people here follow the dance form which will be comfortable for the dancers if we talk about attire, similarly we are also comfortable with our dance form and the attire. But, as we want to perform with Saudi performers so we will try our best to follow the culture of Saudi but we need to perform well, so we need to be comfortable also. So, the solution is we will show the attire to the Saudi management team before the performance to take the approval. Performance with men is an important part of french dance, so we will take care of this also according to the Saudi culture. A performance trial will be shown to the team before the final performance to satisfy them that there is nothing against the Saudi culture.

Conclusion :

Ms. Dubois told the Saudi management team about the advantages of this performance that this performance will help both the countries to know each other's culture. This will be beneficial for future business and relations of both the countries. By this performance, people from both the countries will learn the art of each other's country which is good for them because learning new arts is always good. Professionally if we see this performance will help us to attract more people or a big number of people to watch the performance, this will help both the countries economically too. If this venture is successful here then we can think about the world wide tour together. This may improve our global image and we will come close to the global culture. So, we should go for the contract.

Saudi management team will think over it positively because Ms. Adelle Dubois has resolved all the concerns about culture to an extent.

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