Question

Please revise the following email.

Subject: ConnexCable The Nation’s Largest Cable TV Producer - Price Increases

Dear Mr. Singh,

As the nations leading producer of cable entertainment ConnexCable have been working continuous to bring you the highest quality programming and cable features. Because many next generation technology features are available at this point in time we are investing in them to make sure of the fact you have more programming choices and improvements in customer service.

Some of the recent improvements include a main dashboard layed out in a tile format. This will give you direct access to recorded and bookmarked shows as well as access to Facebook, Pandora, and additional online media. There are voice command. On your remote control, so you can search for shows, movies, web videos. Our new system is four times faster then the current model and uses less energy then other cable boxes, which is why we are raising the prices.

These improvements, when combined with the rising costs of doing business and escalating programming charges has increased our operating budget. Although we are forced you raise your price, in selected packages, adjustments are small and cost of programs (some) actually really declines.

If you receive the Basic Cable package you wont see a price increase. Depending on where you live that package will remain at the price of $23 to #28 per motnh. If you receive the Digital Economy package you will see a rate decline, depending on you’re package this decline will range from eight cents to ten dollars per month.

A complete schedule showing rate adjustments are encolosed. Although the cost is going up, you get the best in voice, video, and data transmission. We offer exceptional value and entertainment. We appreciate your loyalty and money.

Sincerely,

Diana

I saw the solution on website it was nothing changed. so, it was not correct and need to make changes as per requirement.

Answer 1

Subject: ConnexCable The Nation’s Largest Cable TV Producer - Price Increase

Dear Mr. Singh,

As the nations leading producer of cable entertainment ConnexCable has been working continuously to bring you the highest quality programming and cable features. Because many next generation technology features are available at this point in time we are investing in them to make sure of the fact that you have more programming choices and improvements in customer service.

Some of the recent improvements include a main dashboard layed out in a tile format. This will give you direct access to recorded and bookmarked shows as well as access to Facebook, Pandora, and additional online media. There are voice commands on your remote control, so you can search for shows, movies, and web videos. Our new system is four times faster than the current model and uses less energy than other cable boxes, which is why we are raising the prices.

These improvements, when combined with the rising costs of doing business and escalating programming charges have increased our operating budget. Although we are forced to raise your price, in selected packages, adjustments are small and cost of programs (some) actually really declines.

If you receive the Basic Cable package you won't see a price increase. Depending on where you live that package will remain at the price of $23 to $28 per month. If you receive the Digital Economy package you will see a rate decline, depending on your package this decline will range from eight cents to ten dollars per month.

A complete schedule showing rate adjustments is enclosed. Although the cost is going up, you get the best in voice, video, and data transmission. We offer exceptional value and entertainment. We appreciate your loyalty and money.

Sincerely,

Diana