Question

REWORD THE TEXT TO 6TH GRADE LEVEL DO NOT USE ONLINE SOURCES PLEASE

• Obama was expected to give his keynote speech on Tuesday night 27 July. Before his presentation, some Obama advisors were worried, because it was the first time he had used a teleprompter.Obama soon went into a brief autobiographical session talking about his grand-dad made a living by working as a servant for the British, to his own dad who had got a scholarship so that he could come to the United States. Then talked about his mother's family, explaining his grandfather fighting in World War II under Patton while his grandmother was working and taking care of his mom..  

• He spoke about the simple librety enunciated in the Declaration of Independence, and he said in the 2004 election he thought was a time to reassure these values and remember that "We have more work to do." He then went on to mention several Americans he met who weren’t doing good with jobs, healthcare, and education, saying that "they don't expect the government to fix all their problems, but they hope, deep in their hearts, that with just a small change in priorities, we can ensure that every child in America has a fair shot at life and that the doors in opportunity remain open to all.In the next piece of his speech, Obama addressed John Kerry, stating his core principles and convictions on a variety of topics, interrupted by a tale of a young Marine he had met and affirmed that when military action is conducted, the families and soldiers involved must be looked after and that there is a duty to never go to war without adequate troops to win the war, secure peace and gain world respect. "Obama subsequently returned to Kerry and expressed his determination to keep America safe. Obama then discussed the notions of community and cohesion in America that individuals suffering elsewhere affects us even though we are not directly involved in it.

Answer 1

Basically, Obama had to give a speech for the first time using a teleprompter, which is a device that gives you prompts or visuals just like cue cards so that you would remember your speech. His advisors were worried as he was using that device for the first time and had no prior experience with it. He started talking about his life, his grandfather who used to work for Britshers and how he fought in the World War 2, his grandmother who used take care of his mom, his father who got a scholarship and shofted to USA.

Then he started saying about liberty in the Declaration of Independence, and said there is more work to do for the country. He mentioned that the Americans were not doing great with their jobs, healthcare, education etc and there is a need to change the priorities so that everyone would get a fair opportunity. Obama stated John Kerry, stating his core principles and convictions on different topics and then told the story of a young Marine about not going to a war without the adequate troops needed to win it. He then expressed his inte tions abbout keeping America safe and discussed the notions of community and cohesion in America that individuals suffering elsewhere affects us even though we are not directly involved in it.