Question

Find a Web page or personal blog that you feel has serious writing errors. Make all of the necessary changes to the page and explain what changes you made and why. Include the original text in your submission.

Answer 1

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GOLDEN MILK: Gold is very attractive isn't it ornaments of Gold very beautiful and attractive

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it is wealth too, isn't it, But what is this if we use Golden Milk it is(

also very wealthy and the wealth is your health, Yes if we have health we can earn wealth. My Golden Milk is with turmeric. Do you know the benefit of TURMERIC AND MILK combine together? It epitome of health look at the benefits a simple herb is providing.

Turmeric is a Golden yellow herb used as the spice in Asian countries,

infusion of milk and turmeric is GOLDEN MILK, It is traditionally used in Indian food and treating specific diseases in itself it is good health tonic with numerous benefits like 1. IMMUNITY, the key to good health is immunity and resistance, if you are prone to infectious disease make it a habit to drink a cup of Golden Milk before going to bed 2.LOOSE WEIGHT the fast food and no or less exercise make a person put on weight

Golden Mik is there for you,3.GOOD REMEY FOR DIGESTIVE PROBLEMS. helps relieve gas and bloating as well as heartburn resulting from gastric reflux. Turmeric increases the flow of bile, which helps in fat digestion. Loss of appetite and indigestion can be successfully treated with a cup of turmeric milk a dayTurmeric can prevent and treat gastrointestinal infections and get rid of worms. 4. FIGHT CANCER; it is commonly used in fighting cancer of breast, skin, lungs, and intestine,5. LIVER TONIS,  The hepatoprotective and detoxifying action of turmeric reduces the impact of injuries to liver tissue by the production of bile.6. SKIN CLEANSER; it clears skin give shiny look to the skin mixed with honey and rose water it reduces blemish and gives a glow to the skin.7.STRENGTH TO BONE; It helps in giving strength to be which is must for human health.

These are all because God has provided the human being with everything look this turmeric helps against Alzheimer's disease too God is merciful he has mixed anti-allergy anti-inflammatory blood purifier and a sle

Correction I did was

1. ormaments spelling mistake ORNAMENTS

2 But changed to ( but) as the word next to comma starts with small letter except for proper noun.

3.Golden mik changed to (Golden Milk) spelling mistake in milk.

4.a day changes made remove a day put full stop .

5., remove the comma and inserted full stop before no 5

6. Liver Tonic. The changes made removed extra spacing.

7.removed the last three words at the end.

8 .3GOOD entered space between 3 and GOOD.

9. infusion changed to Infusion.

10 inserted , (comma) after problem, helps.

11 inserted is before epitom

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GOLDEN MILK: Gold is very attractive isn't it ornaments of Gold very beautiful and attractive

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It is wealth too, isn't it, but what is this if we use Golden Milk it is

also very wealthy and the wealth is your health, Yes if we have health we can earn wealth. My Golden Milk is with turmeric. Do you know the benefit of TURMERIC AND MILK combine together? It is epitome of health look at the benefits a simple herb is providing.

Turmeric is a Golden yellow herb used as the spice in Asian countries,

Infusion of milk and turmeric is GOLDEN MILK, It is traditionally used in Indian food and treating specific diseases in itself it is good health tonic with numerous benefits like 1. IMMUNITY, the key to good health is immunity and resistance, if you are prone to infectious disease make it a habit to drink a cup of Golden Milk before going to bed 2.LOOSE WEIGHT the fast food and no or less exercise make a person put on weight

Golden Milk is there for you, 3. GOOD REMEY FOR DIGESTIVE PROBLEMS; helps relieve gas and bloating as well as heartburn resulting from gastric reflux. Turmeric increases the flow of bile, which helps in fat digestion. Loss of appetite and indigestion can be successfully treated with a cup of turmeric milk a day Turmeric can prevent and treat gastrointestinal infections and get rid of worms. 4. FIGHT CANCER; it is commonly used in fighting cancer of breast, skin, lungs, and intestine, 5. LIVER TONIS, The hepatoprotective and detoxifying action of turmeric reduces the impact of injuries to liver tissue by the production of bile.6. SKIN CLEANSER; it clears skin give shiny look to the skin mixed with honey and rose water it reduces blemish and gives a glow to the skin.7.STRENGTH TO BONE; It helps in giving strength to be which is must for human health.

These are all because God has provided the human being with everything look this turmeric helps against Alzheimer's disease too God is merciful he has mixed anti-allergy anti-inflammatory blood purifier,